2011년 4월 27일 수요일

Paragraph Writing : Extracurricular Activities

Main Idea : Extracurricular activities are beneficial for all students.

     Extracurricular activities can give great advantage to students. They give diverse experience to students. Such experience like leadership, teamwork, and artistic inspection is significant for one to be a member of society, and studying and scholarly knowledge is never enough for socializing. Also, many extracurricular activities improve the scholarly ability of students at the same time. Sitting in one place for several hours and doing nothing but study cause severe decrease in efficiency. Students need to do something else from time to time, so that they will be able to focus on their academic job again. For example, sport makes students healthier both in metal and physical way.

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